Question by Livvy R
its long so just skim and tell me what you think.
Olivia Lange (main character)
Sex: female
Age: 16
Eyes: emerald green
Hair: long, curly, light brownish blonde
Skin: kind of tan, but still pale
Height: 5” 4
Style: tomboyish but still girly
Personality: she’s quiet about her thoughts and opinions. She’s not shy and she’s very independent. She’s artistic and loves to draw. She has guts and loves to do things dangerous just to feel the adrenaline rush
Rebecca Lange (Olivia’s mom)
Sex: female
Age: 40
Eyes: emerald green
Hair: short, spiky, dirty blonde
Skin: tan
Height: 5” 7
Style: girly
Personality: she’s out going, independent, secure, and a very loving mother. She hates the outdoors and prefers to spend her time shopping. Though she and Olivia look a lot alike they have completely different personalities
Massey Lange (Olivia’s grandma)
Sex: female
Age: 59
Eyes: olive green
Hair: white blonde, chin length, bangs just above her eyes
Skin: pale
Height: 5” 5
Style: like all grandmas but still stylish
Personality: very wise, intelligent, understanding, loving, and is quite care free. She prefers to go out and do things instead of staying in wondering if she should or shouldn’t
Andy Price (Massey’s close friend)
Sex: female
Age: 49
Eyes: chocolate brown
Hair: light brown, straight, shoulder length
Skin: tan
Height: 5” 7
Style: girly but sporty
Personality: loud, open, loves going out and is mostly at Massey’s house
Beatrice Price (Andy’s only child)
Sex: female
Age: 17
Eyes: chocolate brown
Hair: light brown, straight, down to the centre of her back
Skin: tan
Height: 5” 6
Style: tomboy
Personality: quiet, though the guys love her she prefers to keep to herself. Most people would say she is beautiful and is fit to be a model but she would rather be behind the camera. Loves photography and is very sure about her future
Darian Pearson (Olivia’s crush)
Sex: male
Age: 16
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde, curly
Skin: tan
Height: 5” 7
Style: very sporty and preppy
Personality: sweet, kind, gentle, caring, an artist. Quieter than all of his brothers.
A dare devil
Linn Pearson (Darian’s brother)
Sex: male
Age: 17
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde, curly, short crop close to the head
Height: 5” 9
Skin: tan
Style: sporty, surfer
Personality: loud, a joker, will make fun of you for any flaw you may have- even though he has many.
Jake Pearson (Darian’s brother)
Sex: male
Age: 18
Hair: blonde, straight, shaggy
Height: 5” 9
Skin: tan
Style: sporty, surfer
Personality: a gentleman, polite towards the ladies, but a jackass towards his brothers
Brock Pearson (Darian’s brother)
Sex: male
Age: 15
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde, gelled straight up
Height: 5” 6
Skin: tan
Style: sporty, punk
Personality: loud, rude, a dare devil, annoying, but cute
Jet Pearson (Darian’s dad)
Sex: male
Age: 42
Eyes: blue/green
Hair: blonde, short, close to the head
Skin: tan
Style: business man (suite and tie)
Personality: kind, but is never there because he is on business trips
Terra Pearson (Darian’s mom)
Sex: female
Age: 40
Eyes: turquoise
Hair: blonde
Skin: tan
Style: girly
Personality: acts young, is beautiful and knows it. Loves her boys, and even though she is the only women in the house hold she would rather have a girls night out with some close friends.
Answer by Sugar-Quill Drops
They’re fine.
Why does it matter, really?
That’s like taking a handful of real people and asking someone to critique them .
“Yeahh… I don’t like Taylor’s hair… Matthew should keep his opinions to himself… ”
They’re YOUR characters. Keep them as such by doing what YOU want with them .
Good luck writing! <3
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